Summary:

You start with an interesting question and topic, considering the increasing number of “metrosexuals” that I seem to see nowadays. The entry revolves around the topic of men always having a feminine side, which is most of the time kept secret. The thesis statement is stated: “I believe that it would kill every man to find out that they are actually a lot more of a woman than they know it.” The body consists of three entertaining anecdotes that support this thesis statement.

Assessment.

- Excellent choice of a topic. I too believe that every man has a feminine side, well except Rambo or that dude in the game Contra.
- This is just me but I noticed that men are, more and more often, being referred to as sausages “sausage-fest” or “sausage-bonding.” Well, I suppose it’s the culture nowadays with movies like Good Luck Chuck, Superbad, The American Pie series, Knocked Up, etc. that portray men as a horny, testosterone-driven sex (which isn’t entirely wrong, in fairness. But come on, not all men are like that). And the same reason why I find the referring to men as sausages particularly entertaining is the same reason why I dislike it. Are we all just walking penises? (oops, censor?) Haha, but really, I think it’s a degradation of masculinity. But I know you had to use it as a hook and in the conclusion, which was quite entertaining ^_^. Nevertheless, I still think it’s a great entry.

Other Comments:
-Word up, Beast. Haha I wonder how a She-beast would look like

Summary:
You opened up with a very interesting question, considering the increasing number of “metrosexuals” nowadays. The entry revolves around the topic of how feminine some men can be, sometimes in secret. He states his thesis statement: “I believe that it would kill every man to find out that they are actually a lot more of a woman than they know it.” And later supports it with three entertaining anecdotes.

Assessment:
– Excellent and very entertaining topic and anecdotes, I had a great time reading it. I too think that men always have a feminine side to them, except Rambo or the dude in Contra.
- This is just me but I noticed that males are being referred to sausages more and more often. Well, perhaps it’s just the culture today with movies like Good Luck Chuck, Superbad, American Pie, Knocked Up, etc., which all portray men as a horny, testorone-driven sex (which isn’t entirely wrong though, but come on, we’re not all like that). The reason why I find referring to men as sausages entertaining is also the same reason why I dislike it. Are we all just walking penises? (Oops, censor?) Haha, but really, I think it’s a degradation of the sex. Nevertheless, this is still a very entertaining entry.
- Nicely written Dritch.

Other comments:
- Word up, Beast. Haha I wonder how a She-beast would look like

SUMMARY:
Mr. Aldrich Chung opened his blog with a very intriguing question. Indeed, it had me hooked the very instant I read it (That’s one hook of massive proportions, considering that it managed to hook one Beast of a “fish”). After narrowing his ideas, he finally drops the “bomb” – his thesis statement: “I believe that it would kill every man to find out that they are actually a lot more of a woman than they know it.”
After stating the main idea of his blog, he provides substantial support through exemplification. He narrates 3 stories about people he knows: 1) Red, 2) Don, and 3) JJ.
Finally, he ties everything up with a solid conclusion.

You really had me thinking how much of a “man” I was. Quite the challenge, I might add, for I don’t think I’m much of a man.. more of a Beast. But enough of this! I digress. On to things of more import…

ASSESSMENT:
This piece was very well though of. I must commend the choice of words and the humor packed within these sausage-filled sentences.
The entry was very organized; the logic, very sound. I have nothing more to say but this: Touche, Mr. Chung! Another job well done!

After much contemplating on the matter at hand, I have come to the conclusion that I am 100% Beast and am 100% interested in meeting (and possibly mating with) a SHE-Beast. 8D hahaha!

Till next week, Mr. Chung!